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Please can you read this and tell me what you think.....?
I fell and fell and fell, tears flew down my face. My hair streamed into my sobbing mouth. I couldn’t stop falling. Down and down. It was so dark, I was so scared. My heart thumped wildly and sweat sprang off my forehead.
I tumbled further on, my hands shaking. I didn’t know what to do, I was paralysed with fear and screaming desperately.
It was getting lighter. Beneath me I could see a yellow light dimly glowing, I realised; I was heading straight for it.
I closed my eyes as I plummeted down the last stretch of my journey, soon I would be there.
At last I felt the strong wind hurtling past me lessen and a rough rocky jolt threw me to the ground.
I had reached the bottom.
A bright white light burned my eyes and I felt stiff cold sheets pulled up to my neck. My eyelids flickered, I opened my eyes slowly and peered blearily around.
I knew it well, hospital.
i wrote it age 13 
please tell me what you think.
btw its not a dream its real
All I can say is I think its very good for your age. I wanted to read more (there was suspense), you had perfect spelling and grammar (something to be admired in a young writer), and you used a variety of words. Best of luck to you as a future author.